Muncie citizens came to Minnetrista Cultural Centre to celebrate the Independence Day at the fourth of July. Many people came with family and friends to watch the yearly fireworks party.
Along with the celebration of Independence Day in Minnetrista, a few opinions towards the fireworks party popped up among the citizens.
“It’s boring. We sat around here
for two hours. No joke, no joke,” said John Pierce, a young citizen from Muncie
who was coming early with his friends to see the fireworks party.
On the contrary, some citizens found the celebration of the
Independence Day in Minnetrista very interesting. Citizens began to fill up Minnetrista early before the fireworks started because they wanted to get a good spot to watch the fireworks. A lot of people were seen
enjoying their time with family and friends together while waiting for the
fireworks which began at 09.30 PM.
“It’s a lot of fun and it really represents how much fun and
how much our country means to us.” Said Neil Rinky who came to Minnetrista with
his friends and family.
This is a good start, Amelia! Your first quote is punctuated well, but I'm not sure what happened with the second.
ReplyDeleteRemember to always look for a specific angle to pursue & to clearly articulate that in your first paragraph.
-Adam